Use this bit of dialogue in your story.
Written for my fiction workshop class. The focus was dialogue. I don’t know why I changed the names, but I based this off of my “The Story” characters of Tucker and Sarah. It’s funny because I kind of like the new names.
Hallmark Doesn’t Make a Card for That
The numbers all blurred together. This was the part of Emma’s job she hated the most–the part that involved math. She erased another error. If she hurried she could still make her date with Derek. She glanced around at all of the books needing to be shelved. Really hurried.
The bell above the door tinkled. She hated that bell. “We’re closed,” she said without looking up from her scribblings. Shoes squeaked across the linoleum floor. With a sigh, Emma raised her head. “I’m sorry, but we’re-” Her words trailed off, all thought abandoned at the sight of the man standing in front of her. “Cooper,” she whispered. Read more…
I make some apology for these, lol. The challenge was to write three stories that were dialogue only. I admit these are a bit OC but I wanted them to be fun.
There’s a Reason
by jennickels (aka Jen Connelly)
Jack has a little fun with Sam while visiting the SGC. Takes place some time after season 10. Written for the dialogue only challenge at stargateland.
don’t own… wish I did, but I don’t. No infringement intended.
“Are you sure about this?”
“Why wouldn’t I be?”
“It’s just so unlike you.”
“Maybe it’s just like me and you really don’t know me that well.”
“I think I do and-”
“Shut up, I’m trying to work this out.”
“… It’s just you always said you didn’t want to risk your career. Or Sam’s. So why now?”
“It’s just time. I’ve been waiting forever for this.”
“I’m just saying, it’s risky.”
“Anything worth anything is.”
“O’Neill, Colonel Carter approaches.”
“Hurry and hide. And don’t you dare interfere.”